Front cover and Feature article

This lesson i am redrafting my feature article as i handed it in on Monday and got feedback which was to make it longer and more natural as the interview was more formal than it needed to be. i will use more simplistic language as it is aimed at teens and young adults therefore it will be more relatable for them. I plan to make the fact file on one of the artists longs too. I am also making the last few changes to my front cover such as the main image as the focus is not great and on a full size magazine it wouldnt look great so i plan to take a few new photos.
This is the interview from my article-