Evaluation

Evaluation powerpoint from EmHall

Preliminary task

This is my premilinary task, i can see that i have improved a lot as the music magazine i have made is a lot more authentic than this, I have done a lot of research on magazine conventions since i produced this.

NEW FINAL CONTENTS PAGE

This is my new final contents page. I have changed the the length of one of the boxes, changed the side in which the page numbers are, took away certain effects and also added more writing on the bottom.

NEW FINAL FEATURE ARTICLE

This is my new final feature article, i have changed the layout and the article, i think it look a lot better and more authentic. I am much happier with this.

NEW FINAL FRONT COVER

This is my new final front cover, i have added the date and made some of the text boxed bigger.

Front cover changes

I have changed the text on my front cover from "Smashes America" to "Back in the studio" as i have changed my feature article.

New article, final changes

I am changeing my feature article as the first one i had done was weak, and when tralking to target audiences i got some ideas on what i should change. I am keeping the same photo of Liam, however i have changed the layout so it its bigger. This is my progress so far.

 

 

Long Weekend

We are off school on Monday which means that i miss three lessons of media so i will make sure to do some over the weekend. I will finish my evaluation and revise for my exam.

Updated contents page

This is my updated contents page as i have added page numbers.

Contents

This is my final contents page. I have improved it by moving the images and adding another one, this is because my style model has a busy contents page and before i changed this, mine was quite plain so i needed to add more. I have also put boxes and glows around the photos so they stand out more.

Questionaire

I have created a questionaire to hand out to people who fit the target audience for my magazine. I used the feedback i got to change certain things about it and also to get an idea of the parts of the magazine which they like. Most people liked the front cover the best so i have not changed much on that, others liked the contents, however, the feature article was the weakest part of my magazine so i am planning to change the layout.